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Clearing Skies
Chapter 1 - There and Back Again
by Calger459 ~ 15.Jan.2005
Sanosuke’s eventual return to Japan after the conclusion of the manga has been a plotbunny hopping merrily around the inside of my skull since before I went to Japan…so for a long time now. In an attempt to combat the rut my muse has fallen into lately, I decided to finally write it down. This is going to be a fic starring primarily Sano, Kenji and Yahiko, with the rest of the Tokyo-gumi thrown in for extra spice.
Timeline note: This fic is separate from Prism, i.e. it follows primarily manga canon. In this story, Prism never happened. That pretty much rules out the events of An Inn in Hokkaido too, but that won’t factor into this fic anyway so it’s a moot point really. Okay, we good with that? Great.
Disclaimer: Sanosuke, Kenshin and co. are copyright all the various rights holders in Japan and the USA including Nobuhiro Watsuki, Sony TV, and VIZ Communications. This story is for entertainment only, I'm definitely not making money from it, so there. Spoiler warnings: Just as with my other fics, I’m assuming you’ve read through the whole manga series. If not, go read Maigo-chan’s fantastic translations or read the Shonen Jump graphic novels being put out by VIZ. No major spoilers this chapter, but I’m sure there’ll be others later. You have been forewarned.
All right, now that that’s out of the way…On with the fic!
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Meiji 28 The tiny passenger ship
rocked wildly against the sea, leaning sickeningly from side to side
in the strong summer wind. Most of the passengers had long since
retreated below decks, too nauseous to even think of straying far
from what passed for toilet facilities on the rickety vessel. Only
one person seemed unaffected; a tall, wiry Japanese man slumped
against the side railing. He hardly noticed the motion of the ship.
After all, he’d been at sea almost constantly for the past several
months. He yawned lazily and
stared out over the endless expanse of water. It was taking him a lot
longer than he’d anticipated getting back to Japan. It had been
months since he’d left the southern coast of China. At first he’d
made good progress towards home, and he’d figured he’d be back in
Tokyo within three months, tops, just in time for a few New Year’s
parties with his old gambling buddies, presuming they were still
around. It had been a good plan, but as with nearly everything else
he did in his life, he’d hit a few snags along the way. “Sir!” A man, one
of the crew, called from a doorway behind him. “It’s getting very
rough, please come down to the passenger hold!” After so many years
traveling mainland Asia, he understood the man’s heavily accented
Chinese perfectly. But he was quite content where he was. He ignored
the crewman. “Sir!” “Leave me alone,”
he grumbled in his native Japanese, shooting a warning glare at the
sailor, who was less than half his size. After a tense few seconds
the tiny man hastily retreated. He returned to his
musings. He supposed that, really, his brilliant travel plans had
been doomed from the start. He tended to take that sort of thing
stride, however. When one was a “professional” traveler—he
couldn’t repress a sarcastic chuckle at the thought—one learned
to improvise. So while getting arrested in Singapore had been
inconvenient, and their prison surprisingly hard to escape from, he
hadn’t let the delay bother him too much. Even his “borrowed”
escape ship sinking off the coast of Taiwan, and his subsequent
capture and interrogation by the authorities, had been an acceptable
delay. He’d been in enough prisons in his life, what was one more?
However, if there was one thing Sagara Sanosuke hated above all else
it was getting lost, and he’d wandered the entirety of Taiwan for
nearly a month, pursued by cops the entire time, before he’d
finally found a Japan-bound ship to stow away on. He’d thought he was
home free then. But nooooo, there had to be that one guy on
the boat who hadn’t liked his face and squealed to the crew. That
had led to a number of…unfortunate incidents, and he’d
found himself dumped on a random island in Okinawa. It’d taken
weeks to get passage from there. He smiled ruefully. Story
of my life. At least he was finally on the last leg of his
journey. From here it was a clear shot to Japan. Despite the summer
season the ocean winds were cold. He shivered slightly and pulled his
worn travel cloak more tightly around his shoulders. Anyone looking
closely at it would have quickly realized that it hadn’t started
life as one. Although it was gray with age and very frayed around the
edges, it was nevertheless clearly recognizable as a retooled white
hanten jacket. On the back was a faded kanji character, and the other
Japanese passengers had immediately given him a wide berth once
they’d recognized it. He smiled grimly. It really was a useful
thing at times, having the kanji for “wicked” on your back. It
had served him well on many occasions. His expression grew
somber with that train of thought. There had been a time, long ago,
when being ignored and avoided would have seriously rankled him. He
had lived to fight, and as a result he’d had far more enemies than
friends. He had never seen this as a problem. If he didn’t fight,
then he couldn’t get stronger and avenge his taichou’s death. He
had actively sought out encounters with others; the tougher and more
violent, the better. No, solitude had certainly never been his goal
in his youth; ironic that nowadays he preferred it. After nearly
twenty years of traveling and dealing with people of every
description, he had to admit that he was burned out. He was
thoroughly sick of the company of strangers. The wind shifted and
the long ends of his tattered red headband, soaked with sea spray,
flapped wetly into his face. He flicked them away and ran his fingers
through his spiky hair…and winced when it crunched audibly under
his fingers. Oh that’s nasty. Must be all the sea salt in the
air. That’s it, first thing in Yokohama I’m getting a bath.
Resting his chin on his hands, he peered grumpily out over the water.
How’d he let his thoughts get so dark anyway? That sure wasn’t
like him. I may be getting older, but I’m too damn young still
to be brooding like this. Pathetic. Then he saw it, far in
the distance, the very top of Mt. Fuji rising above a strip of land
that had appeared on the horizon. His mood lifted immediately. I’m
almost home. Closing his eyes briefly, he let the old memories
wash over him like a pleasant balm. Images of his friends, of a
young, pony-tailed kendoist and an enigmatic red-haired swordsman,
sadness clouding his dark violet eyes. Kenshin. Kaoru.
You’d better still be in Tokyo. He watched the shoreline
steadily become larger and more detailed. He felt nervous and tense
all of a sudden, even though Yokohama was still many hours off. It
had been so long since he’d talked to anyone in Japan. Although
he’d done his best to write letters to them over the years, his
wandering lifestyle had made it impossible for them to answer back.
Even after all this time, he had no idea how they were, and that
worried him. The last time I actually saw them was on that little
dock in Tokyo seventeen years ago. I can’t believe it’s been that
long…I really should have sent a letter saying I was coming home.
Oh well. If there’s one thing I’m good at, it’s rude surprises.
A mischievous grin lit up his tanned, weathered features and he
pushed away from the railing. He shoved his hands in his pockets and
yawned. Damn, now that I’ve brooded I’m hungry. Wonder where I
can get some grub on this floating rat trap?
Sano stepped gratefully
off the end of the gangplank, his stomach growling loudly. No food
on the whole ship, none. Barbarians. He closed his eyes
and breathed in the heavy summer air. The wonderful sound of Japanese
filled the air around him, and the scent of familiar foods drifted to
him from just beyond the docks. I’m home. Grinning, he hoisted
his travel bag over his shoulder and waded into the crowd. As usual
his line of sight hovered well above the Japanese around him; he’d
always been unusually tall for his people. He was surprised though to
find himself looking at the brightly colored heads of literally
dozens of foreigners fighting the crowd with him. That certainly
hadn’t been the case when he’d left; while the number of gaijin
had been growing every year since the start of Meiji, he’d never
seen them this numerous. Not sure if this is a good thing or a bad
thing. Hopefully though people will stop staring at Kenshin all the
damn time as if he were some kind of freak… Stepping off to the
side of the crowd for a moment, he tried to get his bearings. He had
only been to Yokohama a handful of times, and the layout of cities
often changed whenever there was a major fire or other disaster. He
wasn’t sure what direction Tokyo was in from here. The only thing
he knew for sure is that the train went there; if he found the
tracks, he could follow it to Tokyo without getting lost. He leaned back against
a wall as he considered this and stared around at his former home.
Aside from the foreigners, everything was just as he remembered.
There were the noodle, souvenir and sweets shops he was so fond of,
and all the Japanese in the crowd were still dressed in the familiar
kimono he’d grown up with. The only exceptions were a few guys
wearing English bowler hats atop their traditional outfits, which he
found just plain silly-looking, along with a small group of women
spinning around in front of the large glass window of an import shop,
admiring their tight-fitting Western dresses. He found himself
frowning ever so slightly. He didn’t have any particular issue with
Western culture (well, except for trains), but it disturbed him to
see it taking over his home country. I wonder if it’s just
Yokohama, or if it’s everywhere now? He wasn’t sure why, but
the idea just didn’t sit right with him. Sano’s stomach
growled insistently. “Yeah, yeah,” he muttered to it. He spied an
udon shop across the street and he wove his way toward it, sliding
efficiently through the random movements of the crowd. It was only
when he was inside that he remembered he had no Japanese currency on
him. Awww crap. “Irrashaimase!” the
shop owner greeted with a broad smile. “Have a seat! What’ll it
be?” “Well…uh…” Sano
fished out his wallet and shook it. There wasn’t much in it. “I
don’t suppose you take Chinese currency?” The man’s face fell.
“Afraid not sir, you’ll have to head up to the currency
exchange.” “I just got in,
where—“ “Two streets up, go
left at the tanuki statue, head north toward the white Western-style
building. It’ll be on your right across the street; the exchange’s
painted black.” Sano blinked
internally. Ugh…directions. “Um…thanks.” Back out in the street
he blinked in the bright sunlight that had broken through early
morning fog. He knew already that there was absolutely no hope of him
finding the exchange on his own. Hell, he’d already forgotten the
bit after the tanuki statue, but without money he couldn’t even get
his bath, much less breakfast. Stepping back into the flow of the
crowd he let himself get pushed forward with flow of bodies. He
thought furiously of what to do. I could try to convince someone
to guide me to the exchange I guess… Then it hit him and he
nearly smacked himself. Duh, the Akabeko! Still have a tab there. “Oh, there’s no
need to pay now Sanosuke-san. You can just pay your tab back
later…with interest!” Sano winced at the
memory. Oooh boy, I wonder what seventeen years’ interest is.
Tae’s gonna kill me. That is, if I ever make it there. Sighing,
he broke off from the crowd again and ducked into a sandal-maker’s
shop. “Hey there, which way is to the train station that goes to
Tokyo?”
It was just as Sano
remembered it: a long, slightly crumbling tiled wall running
alongside a small river. Soon he’d be at the Kamiya dojo, presuming
it was still standing. It had been a long, hot, dusty walk from
Yokohama along the tracks. He’d surprised himself with his memory
of the route once he’d entered the city. He’d actually made it
here without getting too lost. He’d nearly dropped in at the
Akabeko, which to his relief was still here, but the threat of Tae’s
interest charge, which he was certain she had not forgotten
about, made him think twice. I’d be better off getting Jou-chan
to buy dinner for me. She’ll do it; after all, it’s only polite
to feed a guest. He ignored the continued growling of his stomach
and concentrated instead on the cicadas humming away deafeningly in
the trees around him. In his youth that sound had always annoyed him;
now it was strangely comforting. After all, those damn bugs don’t
live anywhere else but here. I guess I kinda missed ‘em. He
smiled. I really am home. His expression darkened
suddenly. Damn it, what if the dojo’s not even here anymore?
Maybe someone bought it out from under them finally, or it burned
down and they had to move somewhere else. I should have checked in at
the Akabeko; they could be in Kyoto for all I know. Crap, I’m an
idiot. He’d been able to think of little else since getting off
the boat in Yokohama, and he couldn’t wait to arrive at the dojo so
he could stop worrying already. He knew he should have made
some effort to find out his friends’ condition, but he
hadn’t really been able to, practically speaking. He scowled and
scrubbed absently at his hair. Shit, I gotta stop deluding myself
like this. He knew the real
reason, the stupid immature truth; that after leaving home he’d
realized just how sheltered and restricted he’d felt in the shadow
of Kenshin’s selfless protection. He respected Kenshin, hell he’d
even die for him if it came to that, but the guy was just too
damn good. There was no way Sano could ever match him in skill, and
he knew that the older swordsman would always want to protect him. It
was his nature; even if Sano had been as strong as Saitou, Kenshin
would still have felt obligated to play the fatherly bodyguard. In
the end, it had been too much for the young streetfighter. He’d
needed to get away, find his own place in the world and gain respect
in the eyes of people who wouldn’t always be measuring him against
the legendary Battousai. His feelings had seemed so logical at the
time, but now he could see what a stupid, ungrateful ass he’d been.
In his quest to find himself he’d nearly forgotten his only true
friends, his family really, if you looked at it like that.
He’d managed the occasional letter, sure, and even a souvenir when
he had the money, but that was all. Well, what’s done is done I
suppose. Damn it Kenshin, you’d better still be alive. He rounded the corner
and for a moment stood in the shade of the cherry trees, almost
afraid to look. Steeling himself, he looked to where the dojo
entrance should be, and let out a breath he hadn’t realized he’d
been holding. There it was, a welcome and familiar sight even after
all these years. Sano felt himself smile, relief washing over him.
Not only was the dojo still here, as he drew closer he saw other
welcome changes. The school sign was very new-looking, the kanji no
longer painted on in cracked and faded ink but inlaid deeply into the
wood. All of the roof tiles were in good repair, the entrance was
swept clear, and not a crack showed in the plaster wall. Beyond the
wall he could see a little bit of the roof of the house, and many of
its tiles were also shiny and new-looking. The whole place now
carried the sparkle of money, a drastic change from when he’d last
seen it. Huh, I hope they haven’t become rich snobs or
something. Sano came to a stop in
front of the closed gate. For a long moment, he hesitated. Then he
gave himself a swift mental kick to the head. For the love of Kami
man, this is stupid. What, are you becoming soft in your middle age?
“No way in hell,” he growled, and he slid the gate open, striding
inside without hesitation just as he used to. Once over the threshold
he stopped again with a mental blink. The door was unlocked.
Someone must be home. He looked around immediately for Kenshin,
but there was no sign of the diminutive swordsman. In fact the dojo
was eerily silent. Even the cicadas seemed to have quieted down, and
not so much as a leaf stirred in the packed dirt of the swept
courtyard. Out of the corner of his eye, Sano thought he saw a
sudden flash of movement on the roof, but when he looked there was
nothing. He frowned and carefully scanned the buildings, the hairs on
his neck standing on end. Something’s not right here. I’m
being watched. “Hello?” he called out, eyes darting around to
every possible hiding spot in the place; which were many, he admitted
to himself. “Anyone home?” Silence. But the air
nearly crackled with tension and Sano slowly moved toward the house,
stepping under the slight overhang of the porch roof. He walked
forward as casually as he could manage, trying to seem oblivious to
any danger. They’re hiding on the roof. He headed for the
corner of the house and as he did so he flexed his bandaged right
hand inside his trouser pocket. Never did learn to use the Futae
no Kiwami with a knife like that old monk, but it’s still deadly
enough. If you’ve hurt them, you bastard, you aren’t going to
live to regret it. The question is who will strike first, me or you?
He heard the faintest of noises from directly above. It was all the
warning he needed. Sano leapt out into the open, fist swinging up
over his head. A streak of white and blue came blurring down to meet
it from the edge of the roof, emitting a shrill battle cry that made
even Sano’s heart skip a beat. The blur whipped out a weapon and
Sano’s fist drove into a chunk of solid metal; it exploded into
powder and shards. The blur cried out sharply in surprise and then
was gone. Sano dove sideways and
spun, barely managing to duck the long shaft of wood that came flying
at his head. Shit, he’s fast. Sano tried to get a look at
his attacker, but the rapid blur had vanished yet again. Then he
sensed the air shift abruptly behind him. Kenshin would be proud of
the battle reflexes he’d honed over the years, he thought
distractedly as he drop-spun and kicked out. His foot struck a
glancing blow against a chest and he heard a pained grunt from his
opponent. Heh, fast but not fast enough it seems. The blur
streaked away around the corner of the house and Sano ran after it.
He cursed when he found nothing waiting for him. What the fuck is
this!? “Hey you bastard, come back here! Or are you some kind
of coward, sneaking around on roofs like a thief?” He almost
regretted the insult when he suddenly found himself being showered
with roof tiles. Crap! In a flurry of feet and fists Sano
shattered the tiles before they could get to him. He made sure to
look beyond them, though. Experience told him the tiles were merely a
distraction, not a true attack. And he was right; in the next instant
his opponent came off the roof with what looked like a hammer in his
hand. For a long, drawn-out second Sano looked into the other’s
face…and found himself doing a bit of a double-take. He spoke
without thinking. “Kenshin?” His opponent’s bright
blue eyes widened slightly, but he didn’t alter his angle of
attack. Sano leapt backward and his opponent landed where he had
been, hammer raised two-handed like a sword, eyes blazing with fury.
Without another second’s hesitation he launched himself at Sano.
The former streetfighter blocked the hammer with his arm, roughly
suppressing instincts which told him to follow through and turn the
weapon on his enemy. Sano twisted the shaft of the hammer away,
throwing the other off-balance and opening some space between them.
“Whoa, wait a sec, stop! I’m a friend, dammit!” The boy—who Sano
could now see was definitely not Kenshin—remained where he
was. He was breathing heavily, but Sano could tell it was from anger,
not fatigue. His opponent readied his weapon again, nearly snarling
in rage. “Friend?!” he spat, his voice high and boyish. “Friends
don’t come barging into people’s homes uninvited!” Sano opened
his mouth to answer but the boy was already coming at him again,
swinging the hammer like a bokken. Sheesh, I should have known
from the fighting style alone. He’s not half bad but— Sano
dove past him, grabbing the head of the tool and twisting it deftly
out of the boy’s grasp. —he’s still got a ways to go before
he matches his old man in skill. Sano felt a smirk tug at the
corner of his mouth. So you finally got it together, eh Kenshin?
Those are Kaoru’s eyes too, or I’m not a member of the
Sekihoutai. Sano propped the hammer
on his shoulder and eyed his opponent with amusement. “When those
‘friends’ are me, they do.” He grinned. “Your mom could tell
you that much. Nice toy you got here.” He bounced the head of the
hammer against his shoulder. “What were you doing, fixing the
roof?” The boy blinked in
surprise briefly before suddenly vanishing. Sano automatically
dropped to the ground, and he felt the brush of fingers against the
hammer. Oh no you don’t. Sano shot off to the right, away
from the protection of the house. The boy followed, nothing but a
blur, and with a tremendous leap he latched onto Sano’s back,
grappling for the hammer. Oh honestly. With a surge of
strength Sano flipped over in mid-stride, pinning the boy beneath him
when they crashed to the ground. Sano didn’t wait for the boy to
get his bearings. With almost brutal swiftness he flipped himself
over and hauled the gasping boy upright, twisting his arms around
behind him in a vice hold and planting a foot firmly in the middle of
the boy’s back. He pushed ever so slightly, applying what he knew
was very painful pressure to the kid’s arms, and for a moment he
let his opponent squirm. “You done yet, kiddo?” In a display of spirit
that didn’t surprise Sano in the least, the boy craned his head
around and fixed a furious blue eye on him, teeth bared in a snarl.
“What the hell do you want?” Sano blinked before he
could stop himself; he wasn’t sure what he’d expected from
Kenshin’s son, but this blatant disrespect hadn’t been it. Well,
I guess that means the kid’s somewhat normal. “I’d love to
answer that, but we can’t really have a decent conversation like
this. I’m not here for a fight, boy; I told you that already.” The kid actually spat
at him, eyes blazing with an almost demonic brilliance. Sano
considered this in silence, meeting the boy’s gaze calmly. “You
know, kid, now I really know you’re not your dad. He would
never leap into a fight so recklessly. And really, didn’t any
of his politeness rub off on you?” He saw confusion flicker briefly
through the other’s eyes, and the boy’s body relaxed just a
fraction. It’s now or never. “Look, there’s a lot of
ways we could do this, but here’s what I prefer.” Sano abruptly
let go of the boy and stepped back. He left the hammer on the ground
where it had fallen. The boy’s reaction
was swift and decisive; he snatched up the hammer and sank back down
into an attack stance, keeping his hawklike gaze trained on Sano.
Several moments of tense silence passed, and Sano could see the boy
was thinking furiously. He took the time to study his friend’s son.
He noted, not with a little pride, that the boy was the spitting
image of Kenshin, or at least what Sano imagined he must have looked
like when he was a teenager. There were some obvious differences
between them though, aside from the lack of distinctive scars. The
boy’s hair was a dark auburn, almost brown, as opposed to his
father’s bright ember red and his piercing eyes, completely lacking
the sad weight his father’s carried, were the color of the summer
sky, the exact shade of Kaoru’s. And that was her fiery temper
showing through now in her son, Sano was sure of it. “Well?” he
said finally. “You going to attack me again, or can we talk?” The boy frowned. He
didn’t lower the hammer. “How do you know my father? What do you
want from him?” What is with
this kid? “Nothing! I’m an old friend of his, I’ve been
away for a while and I thought I’d pop by. Honest! It’s Sagara,”
he supplied helpfully, trying to fend off the blatant hostility
pouring from the boy. “Sagara Sanosuke.” The boy looked him up
and down for a long moment. Then slowly, warily, he stepped back.
However, he still didn’t lower his makeshift weapon. Sano grinned
wryly. So he was fixing the roof. How domestic. And he
still won’t lower his guard; he’s been well-trained. Sano smiled at the boy,
hoping to calm him a bit. “I’m not gonna bite kid, I swear. So
where is Kenshin, anyway? They at the Akabeko or something?” “No.” The boy
relaxed a little more, but Sano could tell he wasn’t out of danger
yet. He began to get an uneasy feeling. What had happened in the
years he was gone that would require Kenshin’s son to have such
fierce, protective caution? “Sagara-san…was it?” Sano could
tell the boy added the honorific only grudgingly. “I’ve heard
that name before. Father’s mentioned you.” Inwardly, Sano sagged
in relief. “Oh, well that’s good.” It means he’s probably
still alive. “So you can lower that hammer then, can’t you?
Heh, so I was right, you were fixing the roof.” Sano swore the other’s
eye twitched. “My parents asked me to.” “Ah. So what, they
went out of town or something? And they left you here by yourself? No
offense, but you seem a little young for that. Surely they didn’t
take Yahiko with ‘em too?” “I’m old enough,”
the boy said pointedly. But Sano could see curiosity in his eyes.
“You know Yahiko-san?” “Know him? I
practically helped raise that kid! What’s he up to nowadays?” “Teaching kendo.”
The boy didn’t bother to hide his irritation at the constant
questions. “Look, they won’t be back until next week. Just come
back then. I’ve got work to do here.” Sano suddenly found
himself holding back laughter. No wait, I take that back. He’s
just like his dad! “Oh come on, you’re what, fifteen?
If that? Nothin’s so important that you can’t be a decent host to
one of your dad’s friends. It’s either that or I go bother the
so-called Great Tokyo Samurai, who’ll probably just punt me back
here anyway so you might as well show some manners and offer me tea
or sake or something. Or did your dad not teach you anything?” Now the boy was
scowling, his hand clenched in a white-knuckled grip around the
hammer. “Don’t you—how dare you—“ Sano grinned, laughing
openly now. “Hey listen, I’m just glad your parents finally
managed to get their act together! For a while I was worried they
were going to be tiptoeing around each other forever. Seriously, I’m
glad to meet you.” He gave the other a little half-bow. “I’ve
got no problem waiting until next week, but I’m not leaving without
a drink.” Or food, he added silently. No sense in pushing
his luck at this point. “Your old man owes me that much at least.” “Does he now,” the
boy said flatly, but there was a trace of something else there and
Sano could see that some of the dangerous sharpness had left his
gaze. He finally dropped out of stance, resting the hammer’s head
back against his shoulder just as Sano had done. “Fine then, come
on in. I’ll see what I can do.” He nodded agreeably.
“Thanks kid, I appreciate it.” “I’m not a kid,”
the boy muttered sullenly, spinning on his heel and marching towards
the house. Sano grinned at his back. Oh, this is gonna be fun… TBC…
And it will, too…hopefully. So, Sano and Kenji…a character interaction pairing I haven’t seen much of in RK fanfiction. I’m not actually planning to have Kenshin and Kaoru in this story directly until the very end. They’ll just be talked about and flashbacked to a few times…not quite sure how many yet. As I mentioned, Yahiko will be in this quite a bit (look for him next chapter). I have a large portion of the next chapter mapped out already, basically setting up the story. I don’t have a firm idea of where the plot is going yet, but I’m not too worried. As long as I keep my muse happy I think she’ll provide nifty scenes and plot twists for me like she did for “Prism” :D
Kenji’s character: I’m basically running on instinct here, guys. Watsuki-sensei apparently said that Kenji grew up to be a genius with a twisted personality, challenging Yahiko’s son for the sakabatou and all kinds of other bratty stuff. I’m not sure I totally agree with that…but I do agree with what some people have done with Kenji in their fanfictions. I look at it like this: basically you who have Kenshin, this very intense, protective and intelligent man and Kaoru, who has a fiery, spontaneous and often violent temper but also a kind and loving heart. Add that together and you get a potentially volatile and dangerous combination…but not necessarily a bad person. I think he’s probably a lot like Kenshin before he became hitokiri, only a lot more vocal about his feelings because of Kaoru’s traits. Kenji’s one of those big unknowns in RK fandom; he’s what you want him to be within the bounds of your own imagination and what you understand of his parents’ personalities. So whether you agree with my portrayal or not, it only exists within this story and I’m just going with my own logic here. Fair enough? Constructive feedback on him will be read and considered of course, I’m always open to ideas…but I don’t think Kenji would be either a super-fluffy wimp or a crazed, power-hungry lunatic (I’ve seen both of these extremes on ). We’ll see how it goes…
So what do you think, guys? Remember, I write this stuff for me…but I love hearing from all of you too. CC is a wonderful thing!! Sorry for the long author notes this time, btw. They’ll be a lot shorter (or nearly nonexistent even) next time! Promise!
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